Peer Review:
From the peer review, Hu pointed out that I missed to underline my thesis points and I already correct it. However, although Hu didn’t point out a lot of mistakes in my paper, I think I have to work more on my paper. Probably I have to find out more evidence to support my main points and extend my paragraph. Also, I have to add more words to achieve the words limitation. Moreover, I will go to the writing center before this paper’s final draft due and ask them help me correct my grammars problems as well.
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Yeah, the 1500 version is when I noticed areas for improvement.
ReplyDeleteI'm confident you can make those improvements, tho.
I'll give you credit for this blog, but don't be late again.